So there you go.
Please think of a better pick-up line than "Are you a Damzal in distress? I'm here to save your day"...
Nell looks like he did a lot of work-out ô_ô The eyes should be bigger and higher up (nose and mouth as well) and the neck thinner. Hmm... sorry if it's too much criticism ^^" I have problems with those things as well u_u" But yeah, I definitely like the coloring style... have you more pics to share?
That looks very good! Much better then i could do!